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Holy smoke! This poem is amazing. I loved it! Maybe I shouldn't, 'but maybe you should!' Shut up, stupid brain, you won't do any good! This was by far my ...

Wow. I loved your poem. For not writing poetry, you show a lot of talent in this poem. I really like the way you described the dream and the way ...

Hi, Lee-Anna! Your story was good, but it isn't your best. You were lacking too many details, and I think it would be better if you made it longer. I ...

These pictures are gorgeous, and if you can see this outside your window every day I am jealous! Pictures one and two were pretty much the same, but I liked ...

Wow, this poem is really good. I enjoyed your details. You truly have a talent at writing poetry and weaving wonderful detail seamlessly into your writing. I loved your unique ...

This was really good. It took me a while to get it, but after my "ohhh!" moment, it was an odd kind of beautiful. There was more rhyming in the ...

This a mobile pantoum, and I hope you like it. Wishing on stars for you. Hoping and praying because You need to stay longer. All I want is more time. ...

Wow, I really liked your poem! Like other people have said, it's not the best. It could be improved by spending time on unique ways in telling your emotions. Poetry ...

Your poem was good. I enjoyed reading it, but it did seem awkward. You rhymed some words and not others. Then, you described pretty much the same things in multiple ...

One in a Million The one once loved. The one with unaccomplished dreams. The one with unanswered questions. The one with missing pieces. The one that did not live. The ...

Hi there, I love the simplicity of the poem, and you showed great creativity in it. I also think that something to make your poem better is to reword the ...

Hi EmelyEverAfter, The first line made me think the speaker and the person the speaker was talking about were married. In my mind, I think if you weren't writing this ...

This poem is pretty good. I will suggest that you work on the flow, and the length of the lines. The different line lengths missed up the flow and caused ...

A Summer Storm A Pantoum This is a summer storm Wind's whipping all about Blowing sheets of rain Trees are following behind them Wind's whipping all about Summer flowers are ...

These aren't really bad. I enjoyed looking at them. I really like your style and the different designs you used on the mountains in the third picture. I think with ...